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This feeling so overwhelming,
So unexplainable and strong,
It overtakes me,
Sweepings through my body,
Leaving my skins to chill,
And my mouth releases a little sound,
A whimper.

I'm screaming inside,
Wanting to let go of these aches,
These little creatures inside of me,
Floating around,
Scratching at my stomache and chest,
I'm restless, I'm tired,
And you dare not let me sleep.

I feel you closing into my heart,
I can feel you, even though you're so distance,
You smother me with that gentle voice,
I'm hopeless, pathetic,
I'm helpless without you're attention.

Days pass by in years,
Seconds pass by in minutes..
I'm thirsty for you,
Dying from this dehydration.

A whimper fades into nothing,
And yet I still scream inside,
You're voice becomes so distance,
And I am no longer sane.

I drown in this darkness,
Reaching, so desperate to hear your voice,
As if it would brighten this night,
It seems so unbarable.

Lonesome eyes flicker shut,
And soon, you finally let me drift to sleep.
©2008-2010 *Telepathy1994
:icontelepathy1994:

Author's Comments

I didnt know what category to put this under. So I just put it under whatever.

I didn't want it to rhyme because I didn't have time to rhyme. This came into my mind, and I just had to let it all spill out.

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:iconacheronscrow:
You poor your heart out like there is no tomorrow here. Through the souls anguish comes amazing poetry such as this. Me likes!

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"If a man had wings and bore black feathers, few of them would be clever enough to be crows."
--Henry Ward Beecher
:icontelepathy1994:
Thank you.
I'm glad you like it.
:iconnmulder33:
Very beautiful sweetie! We really need to start publishing your work!

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